Today, this morning we got straight into writing Wheae Sarah already had something for us.
First we listened to this orchestra thing and on a piece of paper we had to draw the rhythm with lines on a piece of paper it looked a bit like your heart beat on the machine when you’re in a hospital.
Then we had a couple minutes writing a story that fits to the rhythm of the orchestra play which was very hard for me but not so much for others. after that 2 people had read theirs out loud we went back to editing the story especially putting more descriptive language into the writing piece
At the end Wheae Sarah read the real story behind the orchestra play it was very cool how they made all the instruments fit into the story.
This is my writing its very different from the real story.😁